
For my fourth concentration piece I continued my investigation of how the media affects' society by looking at the way smoking is presented to the public. I began by looking for images in advertisements, etc. and found two strong images of provocative women smoking cigarettes. I thought these two images represented the objectivity of women through the advertisement of smoking very well. I CitraSolv-ed these two images as the first layer of my piece and then found a few more images of old-fashioned advertisements to contrast the new, updated images. Lastly, I included a picture of modern day teenage girls to show the legacy of the way smoking is advertised to women. After finding images I began layers on watercolor pencil, pastels, and charcoal to create a background of smoke clouds. I wanted the mass of clouds to make the viewer question the messages they were being sent about smoking. During critique I was advised to increase the contrast in the values of the piece for more eye catching qualities. I was also told to work on the design structure in the background so that the viewer's eye was led around the work in a purposeful way. From those suggestions I added more media to increase contrast and tried to make the desing in the background more radial. In all, I like that this piece is provocative and grabs the viewers attention through the use of line, shape, value, movement, and rhythm.